Regrets

4 comments for “Regrets”

1. 

   xian

   July 17, 2006 at 9:08 am

   Me? I’d cut the last stanza. It goes without saying.
   But that’s just me.

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2. 

   cecil vortex

   July 17, 2006 at 9:11 am

   I think you’ll be glad to learn that I actually cut the original last stanza, which read “what I’m saying here is that the food inside my intestines is like a jungle animal.”
   -Cecil

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3. 

   heroic imp

   July 17, 2006 at 9:52 am

   Jungle boogie = Tum Tum Club?

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4. 

   Yaniv

   July 18, 2006 at 2:39 pm

   Ditto on what Xian said, for what it’s worth….
   Or else: “The food in my intestines is a pooma.”

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